Originally posted by Traveling Againonce again - there is no need for it here
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry.
I understand your point of trying to remove ambiguity but this one does not need it to clarify the points within the sentence.
If you are going to lunch with both Jesus and Moses, then who is picking up the laundry? The sentence only makes sense when read one way - so does not need the comma.
There is no need for both comma and the word "and":
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, Moses will be picking up my laundry."
OR
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry."
Originally posted by MCAI plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
once again - there is no need for it here
I understand your point of trying to remove ambiguity but this one does not need it to clarify the points within the sentence.
If you are going to lunch with both Jesus and Moses, then who is picking up the laundry? The sentence only makes sense when read one way - so does not need the comma.
There is no need fo
OR
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry."
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses, will be picking up my laundry, and do my homework.
Originally posted by MCAA comma is necessary in this situation. Not using it would be grammatically incorrect.
once again - there is no need for it here
I understand your point of trying to remove ambiguity but this one does not need it to clarify the points within the sentence.
If you are going to lunch with both Jesus and Moses, then who is picking up the laundry? The sentence only makes sense when read one way - so does not need the comma.
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OR
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry."
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus" is an independent clause (meaning it can stand by itself as a
complete sentence). "Moses will be picking up my laundry" is an independent clause. The
rules of grammar require a comma before the "and" conjunction when joining two
independent clauses. (The same goes for these conjunctions: but, for, or, nor, so, yet.)
correct: I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry.
incorrect: I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry.
Also, use a semi-colon (not comma) if you want to join two independent clauses without using
a conjunction.
correct: I plan to eat lunch with Jesus; Moses will be picking up my laundry.
incorrect: I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, Moses will be picking up my laundry.
Commas: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/
Semi-colons vs. commas: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/04/
Originally posted by Thomaster"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry and doing my homework."
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses, will be picking up my laundry, and do my homework.
(see above post) A comma is needed before the first "and" because it is joining two independent
clauses. A comma is not needed before the second "and" because it is joining a dependent clause
"doing my homework" to the independent clause "Moses will be picking up my laundry."
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Originally posted by Traveling AgainSo I was correct?
"I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry and doing my homework."
(see above post) A comma is needed before the first "and" because it is joining two independent
clauses. A comma is not needed before the second "and" because it is joining a dependent clause
"doing my homework" to the independent clause "Moses wil ...[text shortened]... t source for writing issues, especially grammar.
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Originally posted by Thomasteryou should never use "and" twice in the same sentence. if you need to use "and" twice then it is most likely better off as two sentences:
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus, and Moses will be picking up my laundry and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and Moses, will be picking up my laundry, and do my homework.
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus. Moses will be picking up my laundry and doing my homework."
or
I plan to eat lunch with Jesus and do my homework. Moses will be picking up my laundry."
unless this is a list in which case a semi-colon would be correct (as mentioned above)