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@moonbus said
We haven't heard from Drew yet. She entered some cracking good stories in years past and won at least one year.
She is very good, I trust she will participate this time too.

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@torunn said
She is very good, I trust she will participate this time too.
Thank you both ๐Ÿ™‚ I did say I’d like to join in but I’m also very busy doing the garden each day and find I’m exhausted by the evening.

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Oh come on, Drew, you're not going to be in the garden every day for six weeks. It'll rain at least once, and on that day you imagine you've dug up a skeleton in your garden and write it down.

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@drewnogal said
Me too!

Like Moonbus’ suggestion of the ghost/supernatural/scary theme.
That is Drew' post from May 17th...so no worries

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Ok, ghost/supernatural/scary, huh?

What if it's not exactly "campfire-scary" material, but just uses some traditional horror genre elements, running towards a parody-tribute theme?

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@suzianne said
Ok, ghost/supernatural/scary, huh?

What if it's not exactly "campfire-scary" material, but just uses some traditional horror genre elements, running towards a parody-tribute theme?
Go for it! ๐Ÿ˜€

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@ghost-of-a-duke said
Go for it! ๐Ÿ˜€
Cool. Got an idea, and I started researching it, but fleshing it out is the hard part.

One problem is that I don't even live in, nor even been to, the country where it's set. ๐Ÿ˜• Thank goodness for Google.

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@suzianne said
Ok, ghost/supernatural/scary, huh?

What if it's not exactly "campfire-scary" material, but just uses some traditional horror genre elements, running towards a parody-tribute theme?
So long as it's got "superstition," "phantom," and "twilight" in it, or cognates thereof (I'm assuming, e.g., "superstitious", "phantoms", "twilit" etc.), I reckon it's kosher.

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@moonbus said
So long as it's got "superstition," "phantom," and "twilight" in it, or cognates thereof (I'm assuming, e.g., "superstitious", "twilit" etc.), I reckon it's kosher.
Quite right, almost forgot that, I should add that to my notes.

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@suzianne said
Cool. Got an idea, and I started researching it, but fleshing it out is the hard part.

One problem is that I don't even live in, nor even been to, the country where it's set. ๐Ÿ˜• Thank goodness for Google.
Ah, the undiscovered country. Good start. Very good.

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@suzianne said
Quite right, almost forgot that, I should add that to my notes.
The challenge is to have those keywords melt into the prose so they don't look conspicuous. Torunn was quite kind though, as she could have thrown in hedgehog and satsumas.

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@ghost-of-a-duke said
The challenge is to have those keywords melt into the prose so they don't look conspicuous. Torunn was quite kind though, as she could have thrown in hedgehog and satsumas.
Yes, or "quinquereme", "groat", and "kumquat". Count ourselves lucky.

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@ghost-of-a-duke said
The challenge is to have those keywords melt into the prose so they don't look conspicuous. Torunn was quite kind though, as she could have thrown in hedgehog and satsumas.
Was I too kind perhaps...? Should I have made it more difficult and challenging? I was so into the theme and tried to picture some kind of background.

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@torunn said
Was I too kind perhaps...? Should I have made it more difficult and challenging? I was so into the theme and tried to picture some kind of background.
No, I think you played it well. Will be good to see how the different writers incorporate those words. (I can see ways they could be used creatively).

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