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RHP Verse Competition 2

RHP Verse Competition 2

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u

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i bet i can guess the contestants of this round ...

S

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Only a few more days to go to get your entry in. Response has been somewhat lax thus far, surely there are a few more of you out there who have written a poem at some point. What is the world coming to? Is the art of poetry dead? Have we lost the once proud voice of revolutionaries and lovers alike?

S

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I will not cease from poetic fight,
nor shall my pen sleep in my hand,
till we have bumped this thread a thousand times
in RHP's verse filled forums.

h

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I thought you posted
Then I thought I posted
I'm disposted
W00f!

S

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Once more unto page one dear friends once more!

S

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I am the bump king, I can do anything.

DS
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Originally posted by Starrman
I am the bump king, I can do anything.
Keep that phrase in mind and then watch this...

http://www.weebl.jolt.co.uk/anywhere.htm

Change the lyrics, get an animated Starrman and make a new version?

S

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Originally posted by Daemon Sin
Keep that phrase in mind and then watch this...

http://www.weebl.jolt.co.uk/anywhere.htm

Change the lyrics, get an animated Starrman and make a new version?
I like it! Though I have no idea what an animated Starrman might look like...

DS
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Originally posted by Starrman
I like it! Though I have no idea what an animated Starrman might look like...
Stop changing yer frickin' Avatar and we could base it on that!

S

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Originally posted by Daemon Sin
Stop changing yer frickin' Avatar and we could base it on that!
But that would mean that I would have to decide on something I thought represented me. But since I change all the time, only the continual adjstment of my avatar can do me justice.

d
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The Clock of My Desire
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by
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dfm65
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The clock of my desire
Channels each passing moment
Through the prism of eternity
Tick tock tick tock tick
That's the biggest clock
I've ever seen she gasps
Falling to her knees before it
Moments later
The clock of my desire
Sounds the coming of the hour
DONG! DONG! DONG! DONG!

u

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Originally posted by dfm65
The Clock of My Desire
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by
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dfm65
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The clock of my desire
Channels each passing moment
Through the prism of eternity
Tick tock tick tock tick
That's the biggest clock
I've ever seen she gasps
Falling to her knees before it
Moments later
The clock of my desire
Sounds the coming of the hour
DONG! DONG! DONG! DONG!
alternative ending:

Cuckoo! Cuckoo!



😉 (soften it with smileys)

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