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Originally posted by Nordlys
Take it step by step
One haiku at a time, and
Maybe we'll get there.
so each Haiku is
incremental poetry
(in this thread at least)

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To appreciate
each woman is a flower,
you must see them so.

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
To appreciate
each woman is a flower,
you must see them so.
I'm not a flower.
Maybe it does not apply
To little robots?

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Originally posted by Nordlys
I'm not a flower.
Maybe it does not apply
To little robots?
You are a flower.
You're full of thorns and thistles,
Beauty and danger. 😳

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haiku haiku hai
Hai hai hai hai ku ku ku
My haiku ends now 😀

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Originally posted by huckleberryhound
haiku haiku hai
Hai hai hai hai ku ku ku
My haiku ends now 😀
Very well done, Huck!
You've mastered correct counting.
Next time add content!

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Very well done, Huck!
You've mastered correct counting.
Next time add content!
Content is a word.
Containing both con and tent.
what a funny word.

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
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Seven ate nine, yes.
IAI was also there
(In Antarctica).

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Seven ate nine, yes.
IAI was also there
(In Antarctica).
Your post 789
in the haiku thread right here
how odd is that stuff?

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Originally posted by orangutan
What is a Haiku
Can anyone tell me?
I would love to know
I like your avatar.

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
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you have gone wrong, ice:
eight syllables in line two
and six in line three.

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Originally posted by GinoJ
I like your avatar.
Your Haiku: Too short.
Needs many more syllables.
I like my pic too.

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Originally posted by Officer Dibble
you have gone wrong, ice:
eight syllables in line two
and six in line three.
when he is counting,
I think he gets "seven" wrong.
An easy mistake.

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Originally posted by orangutan
when he is counting,
I think he gets "seven" wrong.
An easy mistake.
There's a musician's
Joke about this. But it's hard
To tell in haiku.

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