12 Feb 07
Originally posted by orangutanTanka would not work
Why not try tanka -
They're a bit longer than this,
Or just go free-form?
Very well either. Although...
It might have its charm.
It could be a double joke
If it is done the right way.
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A 7/4 beat
Is very easy to count.
Just try it yourself:
One two three four five six se - ven
One two three four five six se - ven
12 Feb 07
Originally posted by NordlysHe he, that's funny
Tanka would not work
Very well either. Although...
It might have its charm.
It could be a double joke
If it is done the right way.
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A 7/4 beat
Is very easy to count.
Just try it yourself:
One two three four five six se - ven
One two three four five six se - ven
Does that work in Norwegian?
I think not in French
12 Feb 07
Originally posted by GinoJYour counts off - all wrong
Im representing for the gangstas all across the
World
(still hitting them corners in them low lows girl)
Ill break your neck, damn near put your face in
Your lap
Try to be the king but the ace is back
Five, seven, five - get it right.
That is a haiku
12 Feb 07
Originally posted by orangutanNow all I get is hate mail all day
Your counts off - all wrong
Five, seven, five - get it right.
That is a haiku
sayin' Da G fell off
What cause I been in the lab wit a
pen and a pad
Tryna get this damn label off
Iain't havin that
This is the millenium of Aftermath
Ain't gonna be nothin after that
12 Feb 07
Originally posted by GinoJTrying to assist,
Now all I get is hate mail all day
sayin' Da G fell off
What cause I been in the lab wit a
pen and a pad
Tryna get this damn label off
Iain't havin that
This is the millenium of Aftermath
Ain't gonna be nothin after that
So you can get the gist too,
of writing Haiku.
No hate mail from me Oh no.
'tis just for fun here you see.