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Torunn

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There is never a second chance to make a first good impression - she knew that it was over already.

rookie54
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wildly content...

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the memories burned not in her mind, but in her heart

G

santa cruz, ca.

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The pigeon's aim was perfect, Rusty never saw it coming.

rookie54
free tazer tickles..

wildly content...

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SPLAT!

a word that sounds exactly as the action

Kevin Eleven

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One night in 1873, the Tortoise of the Baskervilles made its way across the lawn to Lady Winterbourne's summer pavilion.

G

santa cruz, ca.

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The trick failed and Rusty screamed as he was sawed in half.

divegeester
watching

STARMERGEDDON

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Caesar Salad, chaney3 and philokia went to sea in a beautiful pea green boat.

Good riddance.

G

santa cruz, ca.

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@divegeester said
Caesar Salad, chaney3 and philokia went to sea in a beautiful pea green boat.

Good riddance.
you couldn't find room for me?

Great Big Stees

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@lemondrop said
you couldn't find room for me?
It was a matter of there not being enough space to allow for social distancing, I'm sure.

Suzianne
Misfit Queen

Isle of Misfit Toys

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As she followed her prey, melding with shadows from building to building, she rounded a corner and ran into an odor she had not smelled since her early training, back in Nanda Parbat... the rancid aroma of desperation.

Kevin Eleven

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@lemondrop said
you couldn't find room for me?
I think that opener leaves you free to have the rest of the first chapter mostly to yourself.

Just watch your back and be aware of your surroundings at all times. πŸ˜‰

Very Rusty
Treat Everyone Equal

Halifax, Nova Scotia

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@lemondrop said
The pigeon's aim was perfect, Rusty never saw it coming.
Trust me lemon if I had seen he was going to drop one on you, I would have let you know, maybe! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

-VR

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santa cruz, ca.

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@very-rusty said
Trust me lemon if I had seen he was going to drop one on you, I would have let you know, maybe! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

-VR
trust me rusty
look up
splat!

moonbus
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To my dear granddaughter whom I shall never meet, by the time you read this letter I shall have been hanged 18 years ago for a crime I did not commit of having killed my wife, your grandmother.

Very Rusty
Treat Everyone Equal

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@moonbus said
To my dear granddaughter whom I shall never meet, by the time you read this letter I shall have been hanged 18 years ago for a crime I did not commit of having killed my wife, your grandmother.
Gruesome start, but makes me want to read more!

-VR

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