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I hate writers who speak to themselves, but if your only audience is the paper it has to suffice.

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@ponderable said
I hate writers who speak to themselves, but if your only audience is the paper it has to suffice.
Hate is a very strong word to use and should not be used lightly.

-VR

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There was this guy you never could accept that rules were meant also for him, it was quiet clear that it would one day fall on his feet.

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@ponderable said
There was this guy you never could accept that rules were meant also for him, it was quiet clear that it would one day fall on his feet.
Did you not mean quite clear? πŸ˜‰

-VR

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"faster faster faster!" the voices screamed in my head as i reached the jumpoff

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Hoping it would be high enough that a bandaid wouldn't fix it!

-VR

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@Very-Rusty

I am drafting a collection of short stories for publication. That one will be included. The working title is “Letter From A Hanged Man.”

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@moonbus said

I am drafting a collection of short stories for publication.
😎

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Now I remember it was during the neo-Victorian revival of the 2090s that Professor Elmsworth invited me to her majestic greenhouse to view her hybrid orchoids.

Earl of Trumps
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It's surely one of our greatest inventions, Shnock, but I shudder to think
what would follow if put into the hands of the Earthlings!

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Since childhood Stephen had eaten bulbs of raw garlic like sweets, a habit that made him extremely unpopular with classmates and rarely invited to parties.

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The fallen buffalo head exploded on impact just minutes after the Piper Mojave jetted across the reservation.

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@wolfe63 said
The fallen buffalo head exploded on impact just minutes after the Piper Mojave jetted across the reservation.
If I'm not mistaken, the Piper Mojave is not a "jet" and thus incapable of Jetting anywhere. πŸ€” πŸ˜‰

Now to the threads title

The Afghan ground to air missile, doggedly tracked the Mig 19.

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@great-big-stees said
If I'm not mistaken, the Piper Mojave is not a "jet" and thus incapable of Jetting anywhere. πŸ€” πŸ˜‰

Now to the threads title

The Afghan ground to air missile, doggedly tracked the Mig 19.
You're correct.
And, likewise, an Afghan "ground to air missile" is not a dog.
πŸ˜€

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@Great-Big-Stees
@WOLFE63

you two are going to have to quarantine for two weeks
you both seem to have gotten a touch of the coronarusty on yer fingers

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